Sunday, December 26, 2010

10 A babe is born in Bethlehem - Sun 26 Dec 2010


Here's a poem I was inspired to write yesterday while roasting turkey in 38 degree heat (that's 100.4 degrees fahrenheit). Just a bit of fun :)


A babe is born in Bethlehem

Twas a cold Winter’s night 
in old Bethlehem town,
everyone was inside
and their shutters were down
When upon the main street
a small sound did arise,
a light pitter-patter
and the glow of four eyes
Walking slow, came a pair
needing somewhere to stay,
but each place that they tried
seemed to turn them away
Yet the night grew cold still,
and the air froze the two
A white mist swirled around
and a frosty breeze blew
Till upon a small inn
the tired couple did come,
the old innkeeper said
“Stay here, soon-to-be-mum”
For indeed it was true,
the female was with child
she looked at the old man,
and it seemed that she smiled.
Out into the cold barn
the pair trotted with haste,
on a bed of dry hay
the young mother was placed.
With a whimper she lay,
the male sat next to her
He gently licked her face
and then nuzzled her fur
For twas soon he’d be born,
in that Wintery fog,
a great saviour of man,
Yes! The true son of Dog.


Linked to Poetry Potluck - Celebrations and Festivities @ Jingle Poetry.

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

Nice twist in the last 2 verses. Well written!

http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/12/27/stocking-filler/

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

beautiful story telling,
Welcome to JP...

thanks for the delightful entry.
fabulous flow.

A++

Anonymous said...

lovely.. mines here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/12/06/time-is-not-the-essence/

Anonymous said...

Wow, some twist there at the end! Great work, enjoyed!

Abigail Bunting said...

Whoa...was not ready for that ending. Great job!

Unknown said...

Fun! As a fellow animal-lover, I delighted in your last verse.

KK said...

nice poem!

Saire said...

Awww thanks everyone! I was a tad heat-delirious while writing it, but had fun :)

Kat said...

Loved it!

irony - the word verification to post this comment is uncat :P

Saire said...

Haha! I love word verification - the things they make you type are unbelievably funny at times :)

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