Monday, December 13, 2010

6 Limits - A Haiku


The day slowly dies,
and I find myself saddened
by what could have been.


Inspired by Sunday Scribblings (#245 - Limits).

6 comments:

Jae Rose said...

Ow, so much in such few words..wonderfully put..Jae

Margaret said...

Reminds (or warns) us to take chances ... or to try harder! Love this.

Shar said...
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Other Mary said...

There are few really good haikus and this, in my opinion, is one! Kudos.

jw said...

I liked your haiku
It was very impressive
Better than this one

KK said...

So true....makes you wonder why you waste so much time at work and dreaming about what your day could have been filled with

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